Zombie Force 5004.

[Brainbuster]

I thought I posted this last night but it doesn't show up in the forum. I've had the idea for a story nagging at my mind. It comes from Voodoo dreams I've had in the past. I sat down and wrote this much of it in 20 minutes last night. I'm wondering what you guys think about it.

Dark Road. Two Cars. 5 People. Rain.

Car one:

Steve: Oh man, this is gonna be ****in awsome! We got two sexy women, some DMT, a ****in freaky ass old house in the middle of no-where and the need to get ****ed up!

Gabe: This was a good idea. I can't wait to get Jessica and Julie naked.

Steve: Dog they're both so hot. It's been a long time coming putting up with their stupid girl shit. They'll be a couple of ****ing animals tonight.

Gabe: Two tight sexy girls stripped down to their true, whorelike nature. But think about it, with Jimmy being there somebodies getting sloppy seconds!

Steve: It's gonna be dark too! If I get a rod up my ass I'll be pissed!
*laughs*

Car Two:

Juile: Stop parking on that joint Jimmy!

Jimmy: There enough to go around!? (passes joint)

Julie: Don't get too high, we all know how that effects your driving. (Puffs joint)

Jimmy: I'm a great driver.

Julie: Tonight's gonna kick ass, I can't wait to be a bad girl. (passes joint to Jessica)

Jessice: You need to be spanked!

Julie: Spank me harder mommy, I need to be punished!

Jimmy: Calm down girls, I'm an expert driver but my senses can only handle so much...

Julie/Jessica: But daddy!
*both cars drive on through the rain*

An old Victorian mansion sits in the full moon. Wind passing through the forrest howles out over the mansions half acre. The unkempt lawn swishes, parrying the thrusts of the wind, creating waves of grass. The elements coming together to create a scene of unmistakable menace. The old house seems alive, it's concience almost awaiting the occupants of the two cars, who's headlights now pierce the darkness from miles down the road.

That's all I have so far. It feels pretty good. I'm getting to know the characters and the setting etc.

The story continues with the kids somehow turning into Zombies. I don't know how or why they turn yet but I think I'm close to figuring it out.

They withdraw from society and are eventually overcome by the lust for human flesh. They take captives to feed off of and the captives turn as well. After a time of repeating this cycle their Zombie Force is created. The Force is not as smart as the original 5 and needs to be kept in line. I'm thinking the DMT had something to do with the original 5's remaining smart and remembering their lives before the turn.

Anyway, the Force goes about mucking things up.

[Brainbuster]

Thanks for the support guys. I've been writing it without any of your help and it's a kickass story. I've filled almost an entire one subject notebook with story.

Does anyone know about getting something published? I want to know if I can make money of selling it or publishing it or whatever $$$.

[Brainbuster]

I really pleased with the way it's going. I've never written anything this long. I worked in a bunch of cool ides.

Theres an old Zombie living (undead) with a curse put on him and his old victorian mansion by an Indian Medicine man. He's all evil and about 400 years old. The 5 Zombified youths, reckless and unpredictable. A tale of a small old Indain tribe shunned by other Indains for cannibalism and evil.

Theres an old man with knowledge of the history of the house, gunfights, mythology, Indian burial grounds, the forrest prime-evil. It kicks ass.

Everything ties together. It's not like I thought it would be starting out.

[Brainbuster]

So this is what I'm thinking. The movies gonna start out with the camera on a dirt road just as bloody in the streets starts playing by the doors.

A car is going to fly by with three zombies in it. one's driving, one's sitting in the back seat and the other has climbed out of the sunroof to refill the gastank (they brought along your usual red gascan) it's eaiser for him to hold on because he's tied to the guy in the back seat with a rope. The zombies are all punks with hot colored hair and chains and leather jakets out ot the 80's.

The zombie on the car has a pistol taped to his right hand and fills the tank as he shoots at the police who are chasing them for bank robbery.

They had the getaway all planned out, these guys aren't dumb.

I wrote a whole shitliad of stuff, all by hand I might add. There's a P.I. named "Hagland" involved, I changed a ton of stuff, names, took the DMT idea out, it's all very interesting. The movie part I just made up in the shower.