It's one of my worse songs, it was mostly written for venting. There are some lines I like though, so I'm gonna save it and see what I can do with it. ^_^

I fell for you
like a lightening struck tree,
offering everything I had.
Then she intervened,
with more to give.
I became the awkward third wheel.

After all this,
now I have to know.
Is she every ****ing thing
you didn't see in me?

(chorus)
She hypnotizes him
with her crystal ball eyes.
Drawing him back with her nicotine kisses,
she numbs his pain with her novocaine touch.
And I know I can't compare.

After all the times
I shrugged my shoulders,
uninterested in anyone but you.
The highlight of my days were our conversations,
about nothing and everything all at once.
Then one of those days you shot me down,
telling me of your angel,
your love,
knowing that it would kill me.

After all of that,
I plead for you to let me know.
Is she every ****ing thing
you were too blind to see in me?

(chorus)

So, is she?
I hope she's every damn thing you ever wanted.
I pray she never leaves your side,
never twists the blade in your back, as you did to me.

After every lie you ever told me,
you better profess.
Is she every ****ing thing
you could never change me in to?

(chorus)

The music and the rhythm could make it really good or really bad-it's not a bad effort.Of course "nicotine kisses" takes me back to when I smoked and woke up each morning with that dirty sock taste in my mouth