IFF
05-27-2008, 03:12 PM
firstly i would like to thank Gibson adn Solardeath for acxtually posting in an attempt of mine at a short story. thank you. :)
now people, let me rant at other people and this is just for me to get it off my chest
i have posted 2 short stories. "parents sex talk" and "the house party" in creative creations forum. i understand these weren't great, they were me trying my best at writing stories. i am, though, however dissapointed at the lack of comments that they entailed from people. this was a total of 2 comments (solardeath and gibson)
the fact that one story has been up for one week and no one has commented on it (and only has got 33 views which is pitiful) i find discouraging from posting any further short story i write here. i feel they've been ignored
the house party elicited about 15 responses on a cycling forumj which has about 10 members on it. on an asexuality forum, it got 5 responses.
parents sex talk on another forum might have ellicited 3 responses. however one of the responses was a guy put in an effort to actually edit my work on it.
this makes my own attempt to be appreciated rather then just ignored. this i find discouraging
yes i know this sounds needy and it is. i just wanted honest feedback. i'd have poreferred negative but helpful feedback rather then zero feedback. to be ignored was the worst possibile but i think it says something
in another previous attempt of mine to get attention/debate on who is the greatest sportsperson, i felt my efforts on this as wasted, ignored by most. what use is having a competition tro decide who was the greatest sportsperson if at some stage only 9 people took part or 10 people. it was also discouraging
yes this is neediness from me. yes i'm just looking for attention but i just feel it has to be said people
now people, let me rant at other people and this is just for me to get it off my chest
i have posted 2 short stories. "parents sex talk" and "the house party" in creative creations forum. i understand these weren't great, they were me trying my best at writing stories. i am, though, however dissapointed at the lack of comments that they entailed from people. this was a total of 2 comments (solardeath and gibson)
the fact that one story has been up for one week and no one has commented on it (and only has got 33 views which is pitiful) i find discouraging from posting any further short story i write here. i feel they've been ignored
the house party elicited about 15 responses on a cycling forumj which has about 10 members on it. on an asexuality forum, it got 5 responses.
parents sex talk on another forum might have ellicited 3 responses. however one of the responses was a guy put in an effort to actually edit my work on it.
this makes my own attempt to be appreciated rather then just ignored. this i find discouraging
yes i know this sounds needy and it is. i just wanted honest feedback. i'd have poreferred negative but helpful feedback rather then zero feedback. to be ignored was the worst possibile but i think it says something
in another previous attempt of mine to get attention/debate on who is the greatest sportsperson, i felt my efforts on this as wasted, ignored by most. what use is having a competition tro decide who was the greatest sportsperson if at some stage only 9 people took part or 10 people. it was also discouraging
yes this is neediness from me. yes i'm just looking for attention but i just feel it has to be said people